Monday, May 7, 2012

Reflection on my Writing


After re-reading the first blog I had written, Bass, Treble, Jess, an introduction of myself as a writer,  a sense of pride overcomes me when I see how much Engl 105 has helped me grow as a writer.  My first blog was all about the introduction of myself and some personal facts as well as the introduction of my topic I would continue writing blogs about and that is the effects of music on the human emotions.  This blog was the easiest to write of the five because since I was only introducing myself and my topic, it was easily relatable to my audience, my fellow classmates.  I briefly introduced bands in my blog that most students my age and older would be familiar with, or at least heard of such as The Doors, The Beatles, and the Grateful Dead. My thesis statement is as follows,  “The way music makes you feel, emotionally and scientifically, is my main point in my blogs I will be posting”.  I believe after looking back on it, that it is adequate, but not great.  It was easy to point out in the blog, although it was a little farther in the reading than most thesis statements.  On the positive side, all three parts, context, subject, and claim, are mentioned, but the claim could be more specific.  In this particular blog, I had shown my ability to analyze through personal experiences.  For about six or seven lines, I give either a fact or a quote, but the next fourteen lines are spent about my discussing of personal experiences and personal opinions about the previous fact quoted.  In the beginning of the semester, I found it much harder to analyze my thoughts in my paper adjacent to another writer’s works, but I am proud to say I feel like it has gotten much easier.
I have never been more proud to turn in a paper than how I felt when I turned my research paper in, Making Our World A Little Greener.  I put a lot of work and effort into trying to persuade my audience that it would be a smart choice for the United States to legalize the sale and recreational use of marijuana.  To have college students as an audience is a great benefit because college students today are our congressmen of tomorrow.  As the generations change, so does the public’s opinion.   My thesis statement, “Legalizing marijuana across the United States would greatly benefit the country as a whole by giving adults a choice, reducing the pain and stress of our citizens, saving law enforcement costs annually, and gaining tax revenue from legal sales” is, I believe, to be very well definied.  It is specific, and contains an effective context, subject, and claim.  I felt that I was finally able to grasp the concept of analyzing another writer’s work with this paper.  By reading their opinions and facts, it was easier to introduce their beliefs with my opinion, either agreeing or refuting, in an organized way.  Almost every paragraph of my research paper was briefly introducing facts and then my opinion following after.
When you compare the first thing I ever wrote in this class, Bass, Treble, Jess, and my most final work, my research paper, it looks like two different writers are being compared.  I have grown and gotten so much better with analyzing and thesis statements.  My writing seems more organized and audience appropriate in my paper than in my blog.  My biggest struggle that I have overcome with writing is definitely the analyzing part and figuring out what is important and credible in a paper and what is not.  In my blog, there was much use of “I” and some run on sentences with irrelevant information.  In Making The World A Little Greener, there are many facts and statistics to show the reader that, as a writer, I have researched enough on this topic to make me credible.  One statistic used to show this is that “37% of U.S residents aged 12 and older and 48% of high school seniors claim to have used marijuana at least once in their lifetime, and 22% of high school seniors claim to have used the drug in the past month (National Drug Intelligence Center (2006).”  As a writer, I have strengthened my ability to write more effectively, analyze better, and capture my audience’s attention for longer.  The paper I am most proud of, Making Our World A Little Greener, is my evidence that I have become a better writer.  Instead of writing about personal experiences that may or may not be relevant to my topic, I have finally figured out how to research a topic and weave their ideas with mine.

Wednesday, May 2, 2012

Research Paper

                                                            Making Our World A Little Greener

A man by the name of John Rosevear, a conservative member of the Legislative Assembly of Ontario, once stated that “Being high is one of the most pleasant sensations available to mankind. Every day is Saturday. It is to be like a child; to perceive events with clarity; to look into the gates of paradise; to completely enjoy whatever you might be doing; to smile so hard that your jaw muscles get tired. Being high is to laugh at the silliest things; to understand things that have seemed absurd before; to have the aloofness of a cat; to afford a kinship with god. To be intoxicated with marijuana makes every superlative seem within your grasp. Being high makes life seem terribly good. Being high is simply grand” (Hardwick, 2011).  The decision whether to legalize marijuana or not has been a controversial topic for decades.  Many citizens of the United States can be ignorant to the benefits marijuana has on the body and are, instead, persuaded by peers into believing false facts about this so-called “drug”.  The drug phase in the 60’s is now over, and it is time that we look at the facts about marijuana and what benefits would be received by making marijuana legal.  Legalizing marijuana across the United States would greatly benefit the country as a whole by giving adults a choice, reducing the pain and stress of our citizens, saving law enforcement costs annually, and gaining tax revenue from legal sales.  With our economy as low as it is currently in 2012, legalizing marijuana could possibly be one of the answers to our country’s financial problems.  Our voters just need to look at the topic with an open mind and forget the facts that are incorrect, even though their peers have told them otherwise.
Marijuana, or Cannabis Sativa by scientific name, is a mind-altering substance produced from a plant, unlike most legal drugs which are manmade.  The primary active ingredient in marijuana, Tetrahydrocannabinol (THC), induces relaxation and heightens the senses. The term marijuana generally refers to the shredded leaves and buds of the cannabis plant, resembling tobacco, but is usually green or brown (Nation Drug Intelligence Center, 2006).  Even though marijuana is illegal, it is not uncommon to come across the recreational users.  In fact, 37% of U.S residents aged 12 and older and 48% of high school seniors claim to have used marijuana at least once in their lifetime, and 22% of high school seniors claim to have used the drug in the past month (National Drug Intelligence Center (2006).  If Americans were to choose to legalize this herb, it would be made legal under the same conditions as alcohol. This includes prohibiting the ability to drive with any amount of the substance in the car, driving under the influence of “pot”, and being of age 21 or older to smoke it at all.   Marijuana is essentially harmless if you are comparing it to other legal drugs, but there are still some effects.  By setting the same age limit of 21 to recreationally use marijuana like alcohol, it still becomes legal, just not to the minors and young adults of our society, which is how it should be distributed.  Adults should be given the choice to use marijuana recreationally if the choice to abuse alcohol and tobacco is condoned.  Consenting, informed adults should be able to decide what they chose to put into their bodies.  From 1983-1986, it became legal for adults 21+ to consume alcohol around the United States.  Even though a person is considered an adult at the age of 18 in the United States, by law, adults cannot drink until they turn 21.  This may seem confusing because when you turn into what society defines as an “adult”, it is assumed that you are given more responsibilities and fewer restrictions on recreational activities.  The reason for the change from 18-21 for the legal age to drink was a result of the high number of alcohol related traffic accidents between 18-20 year olds.  What is even more confusing is that so many deaths are the result of alcohol abuse from traffic incidents alone, yet it is still legal while marijuana is not and it is a proven fact that no one has ever died in any circumstance resulting in smoking marijuana.  The Truth about cannabis’ blog Truth About Cannabis: Cutting Through The Lies explains perfectly that “The facts are as follows: Tobacco causes more deaths than all other drugs (legal or not) combined. Alcohol is next, causing more deaths than all other drugs combined (excluding tobacco). All illegal drugs combined causes about the same amount of deaths as all prescription drugs combined” (p.1).  The question is simple, if alcohol and tobacco are so much more harmful to our bodies than marijuana, but we are still given to choice to consume either if we choose, why are we not given the same option for marijuana?

After a long, stressful day at work, most people look forward to coming home, putting their feet up, putting on a movie, and having a drink or two, or maybe a cigarette or cigar.  This is not seen in society’s eyes as deviant as compared to if you were to light up a joint, even if it is in the privacy of your own home.  This is completely irrational because there is no true reason why marijuana is illegal.  It is actually more sensible to smoke marijuana as compared to alcohol and tobacco.  Marijuana is, in a sense, better than alcohol because it is not possible to get physically addicted to marijuana. Becoming addicted to alcohol can put the body through trauma and can be extremely difficult to stop using as well as the severe withdrawal symptoms when an alcoholic attempts to stop drinking.  Smoking cigarettes usually leads to emphysema, lung cancer, and other fatal respiratory infections as well, where as one of the worst effects of marijuana are temporary damage to the short-term memory.  Marijuana is actually a medicine.   Procon, a nonprofit charity (2012) states that “Proponents of medical marijuana argue that it can be a safe and effective treatment for the symptoms of cancer, AIDS, multiple sclerosis, pain, glaucoma, epilepsy, and other conditions. They cite dozens of peer-reviewed studies, prominent medical organizations, major government reports, and the use of marijuana as medicine throughout world history” (p.1).  Marijuana is also a powerful appetite stimulant, sleep aid, and antidepressant, which can help all people from persons suffering from anorexia bulimia to insomniacs to manic depressants.  After so many studies have been conducted testing the effects of marijuana on all different types of people with different types medical conditions, it is determined that if we were to legalize marijuana, this herb alone could replace more than half, if not all prescription drugs.   There is historical evidence of the use of medical marijuana in nearly every culture.  McMahon states in The Legalization Debate “Historical evidence suggests that marijuana has been used as a treatment almost as long as human civilization has existed.  Over 3,000 years ago, Egyptians used [marijuana] to treat sore eyes and Chinese writings from earlier centuries include references to the plant’s use as a pain reliever” (p.1).  As you can see, marijuana has been medically used almost as far back as history can tell us.  Humans have changed, but the human body has not.  The effects of marijuana are still the same on humans as they were 3,000 years ago, except maybe for the factor of potency and how “high” the user may get.  One of marijuana’s universal benefits is stress reduction.  Continued use of marijuana has also proven to exhibit mild stimulation though mood management notes Psychiatrist Tod Mikuriya, M.D.  Cannabis considered a “go-to” medicine for most psychiatrists when dealing with patients with severe Post Traumatic Stress Disorder (PTSD) as well (Stress Reduction, 2008).   A study conducted at University of Haifa, induced stress similar to PTSD on humans, on rats.  After these rats began to show the same symptoms of PTSD in humans, they split the rats into four groups.  The first group did not receive any marijuana, the second group received marijuana injection after the first 2 hours after induced stress, the third group received it after 24 hours, and the fourth after 48 hours.  The results showed that the first group and the fourth group had shown no improvement and continued signs of stress while the second and third group lost all signs of stressful behavior (University of Haifa, 2011).  Before selling a product, most companies will test their product on rats or other animals to make sure they are safe to sell to the public.  This is because some animals have similar internal systems to humans.  The results of the previously explained experiment showed that the rats that were given the marijuana injection after the induced PTSD, showed no signs of stress afterwards, thus proving that marijuana could reduce stress in humans as well. One of the main reasons marijuana is one of the most used drugs in the world is because it is one of the world’s best stress reliever.
Despite the fact that marijuana is less harmful than other legal drugs, it is the most common drug people are arrested for possessing.  It is a fact that more than 800,000 people are arrested for marijuana each year, most of them for simple possession.  According to the Federal Bureau of Investigation’s annual Uniform Crime Report as stated by Marijuana Facts in 2011, in 2009 alone, police prosecuted 858,408 persons for marijuana violations.  A decade ago, marijuana arrests alone compromised 44% of drug arrests.  Today, marijuana arrests more than half (estimated 52%) of all drug arrests (Drug Policy Alliance).  In the state of Florida, it can cost up to $20,403 per year to incarcerate a prisoner.  Punishment for the offense of possession of marijuana can result from a slap on the wrist to misdemeanor to a felony.  The punishment of a misdemeanor and a felony can result from 1-10 years in prison.  This means that $20,000 to $200,000 of our tax payer’s dollars can go to incarcerating a single person for the possession of an herb less dangerous than tobacco, alcohol, and all prescription drugs.  Legalizing marijuana could possibly free up resources to fund treatment programs for addicts hooked on serious, actual hard drugs, and would allow cops and prosecutors to redirect their focus to more serious criminals (The Nation, 2010).  Our American citizens are ignorant to the fact of how much money is being spent on marijuana arrests when our police enforcement’s time and the tax payer’s money could go to arresting more serious and actual dangerous offenses.  The state of California alone spends $8.7 billion on law enforcement costs annually for marijuana.  Morgan (2009) describes, in response to Obama’s statement that legalizing pot will not grow economy, Jack Cole, executive director of Law Enforcement Against Prohibition refuted with “Despite the president’s flippant comments today, the grievous harms of marijuana prohibition are no laughing matter.  Certainly, the 800,000 people arrested last year on marijuana charges find nothing funny about it, nor do the millions of Americans struggling in this sluggish economy.   It would be an enormous economic stimulus if we stopped wasting so much money arresting and locking people up for nonviolent drug offenses and instead brought new tax revenue from legal sales” (p.1).  The American citizens are spending so much money to keep marijuana illegal and spending even more money by imprisoning innocent people who chose a joint over an alcoholic beverage to relax like any other person, when instead, we could be saving money by legalizing marijuana and taxing it to make a profit to benefit our economy, whether it be a small or big way.
If the United States were to legalize marijuana around the country, the citizens and government could gain tax revenue from legal sales.  Legalizing marijuana could provide jobs for people willing to work in dispensaries, and possibly produce a big enough profit to help the economy.  It is not a secret that the unemployment rate is increasing progressively.  In California, where medical marijuana is legal with a prescription signed by a licensed physician, there are dispensaries all around the area of the large state.  Dispensaries, or actual stores that are licensed to sell certain amounts of marijuana to patients prescribed by their doctor, would be everywhere across the United States if marijuana was legalized.  This would give the hundreds of unemployed people more job opportunities. Gravois speaks about meeting John Schaeffer, a man who opened the store Real Goods in the town of Willits.  Schaeffer started out experimenting in the recreational uses of marijuana and turned an exceptional profit after selling it.  Growing cannabis also helps people learn basic skills such as carpentry, plumbing, welding, and mechanics (Gravois, 2010).  Moffat writes that the Budgetary Implications of Marijuana Prohibition’s report shows that “by legalizing marijuana and replacing prohibition with a system of taxation and regulation [United States] would save $7.7 billion dollars per year in state and federal expenditures on prohibition enforcement and produce tax revenues of at least $2.4 billion annually if marijuana were taxed like most consumer goods.  If however, marijuana were taxed similarly to alcohol or tobacco, it might generate as much as $6.2 billion annually” (p.1).  Given, these are only estimates, but because of how high the estimated profit says we can possibly make for our country, it is worth giving it a chance because whether or not it is that high of a profit, it will still benefit our country in one way or another.  In 1996, California became the first state to approve medical marijuana with a doctor’s prescription and today, the prospect of complete legalization is within reach (Cockburn, 2010).  The state of California collects $18 million annually from medical marijuana alone (Wenner, 2012).  Today, the citizens of California are trying their hardest to pass Prop 19, the Regulate, Control, and Tax Cannabis Act.  This act legalizes various marijuana-related activities, allowing the local governments to regulate those activities while imposing and collecting related fees and taxes, and authorizing various criminal and civil penalties.  Koger, G. describes the efforts of multiple groups of young college students around the United States campaigning for the passing of Proposition 19.  This shows that this act is becoming closer and closer to being passed with so many recruits on board (Koger, 1984).  After so many years living with the prohibition of marijuana and not knowing why, citizens began to educate themselves on the facts of marijuana.  The United States is finally realizing that marijuana is not the dangerous, life threatening drug that the exaggerated movie Reefer Madness made it out to be. This movie is a big part of why marijuana was made illegal.  Louis Gasnier, director of Reefer Madness released in 1936,  sent out the message that if a person were to use marijuana, they were opening themselves up to life containing hit and run accidents, manslaughter, suicide, attempted rape, and/or descent into madness.  This movie when it first came out scared the citizens of the United States because since they were unknowledgeable about marijuana and the positive affects it posses.  This led the country into panic and resulting in the prohibition of marijuana.  Reefer Madness is well-known as an American propaganda exploitation film (Nadelmann, 2011).  The United States could greatly benefit by legalizing marijuana especially taking into consideration that it could be taxed and regulated like everything being sold today.
Many citizens are still hesitant to change their minds about legalizing marijuana.  One of the biggest reasons is because marijuana is falsely believed to be a “gateway drug”.  According to NORML’s Marijuana Health Mythology (1994), there is no specific evidence to support this theory.  “The gateway theory took hold in the sixties, when marijuana became the leading new recreational drug.  It was refuted by events in the eighties, when cocaine abuse exploded at the same time marijuana declined.  The one way in which marijuana does lead to other drugs is through illegality: persons who deal marijuana are likely to deal in other illicit drugs as well” (p.7).  An analogy to consider would be every person who rides a motorcycle started out on a bicycle, but not every bicycle rider learns to ride a motorcycle.  Another common misconception about marijuana is that people believe it to cause long-term cognitive impairment.  The short-term memory is the most clearly affected cognitive process resulting from marijuana.   The truth is, in laboratory studies, subjects under the influence of marijuana did not have a problem remembering information they had previously learned.  There is no evidence proving that long-term marijuana use permanently impairs any cognitive functions or memory.  The short term memory is only impaired as long as the “high” lasts (Drug Policy Alliance, p.2).  The biggest and probably most controversial reason citizens question marijuana is because studies have resulted in saying marijuana is not harmful, and the opposite.  NORML’s marijuana health mythology’s evidence stated that Dr. Christine Hartel, Acting Director of Research at the National Institute of Drug Abuse (1994), claimed that “Government experts now admit that pot doesn’t kill brain cells.  This myth came from a handful of animal experiments in which structural changes were observed in brain cells of animals exposed to high doses of pot” (p.5).  She advises that although no evidence suggests that pot causes permanent brain damage, reoccurring deficits in short-term memory have been noted in chronic, heavy use after 6-12 weeks of not smoking marijuana.  The United States also questioned if marijuana increases the risk of cancer, and surprisingly, it does not.  Several Longitudinal studies determined that even long term marijuana smoking is not associated with a higher cancer risk including tobacco-related cancers, or cancer of the colorectal, lung, cervix, prostate, breast, or melanoma.  A study done in 2009 actually found that moderate marijuana smoking over a 20-year span has the ability to reduce head and neck cancer.  Smoking marijuana has also shown to reduce nausea symptoms induced by chemotherapy, reducing intraocular pressure in glaucoma patients, and to stimulate the appetite of people with AIDS (Drug Policy Alliance, p.2).  So many people go about life falsely believing anything a friend, co-worker, or anyone who speaks with confidence say.  It is a possibility that with citizens in America today, people do not want to believe marijuana is not as bad as they thought it was.  This would lead to a change in the economy which some people are not comfortable with.  As said before, the United States need to start looking at other options to improve our economy with an open mind because we are running out of time to dig  ourselves out of the hole of debt and unemployment our society has dug us into.
Marijuana is not a drug, it is a medicine.  Citizens of the United States are finally starting to understand what almost half of the country believes.  The support to legalize marijuana is growing every day as more and more people inform themselves on the facts of marijuana.  Legalizing marijuana would benefit the United States in so many ways.    It would greatly benefit the United States by giving adults a choice they did not have before.  It would reduce the pain and stress of our citizens, save law enforcement costs annually, and gain tax revenue from legal sales.  This is a fast paced world where decisions are made on impulse and an act or law can get passed much quicker than before.  If the United States chose to legalize marijuana, it would probably be one of the smartest decisions our citizens have made because it can greatly benefit almost every type of person from the father working 70 hours a week to keep food on the table to a person who is unemployed on disability leave because of pain.  When it comes to marijuana, Louis Armstrong states It really puzzles me to see marijuana connected with narcotics . . . dope and all that crap. It's a thousand times better than whiskey - it's an assistant - a friend” (Baked Life, 2008).

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